Tuesday, November 19, 2013


COMMENTARY

FIRST LUNCH CAUSES HUNGER THROUGHOUT SCHOOL DAY

Summary:
First lunch has started to affect many students. Many are not happy with the fact that they get hungry during the day.

Who?
Students

What?
Lunch

Where?
Bowie

When?
Everyday

Why?
To spread awareness of how hard it is throughout the day after having first lunch 

How?
They need to figure out how to make A lunch later.

Who was quoted in the story?
No one

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
There were no quotes

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
No, because I don't like commentaries very much

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
Statement

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